What went wrong?

by Kayla   Jul 6, 2005


We started out,
As great as can be.
I loved you,
And you loved me.
We hugged and kissed,
As all couples do.
What went wrong?
Was it me or you?
Did I make you mad,
To the point of no end?
To deserve all the bruises
That you would always send.
Or was it for love.
That you hit me so hard.
To protect me from danger.
And be my guard.
Did you love me so much,
You’d do it all.
To protect me from the shit.
That would soon make me fall.
The cutting, the starving,
And the popping of pills.
To know it was me,
It just kills.
It kills all the love,
With the bruises and all.
I don’t care what we had.
I just wish you would call.
Call and come back.
That’s what I want of you.
I never asked for much....
Baby I miss you too!

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  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hi kayla! you knw wat wenever u tell me take care in your comments i happen to hav the most wonderful day lol...youre lucky for me :P

    this poem is so sad hun, dont do all that starving and pill popping! i hope u dont!
    i wrote a new poem called "and the robin flew away" dont mind the name lol...and i'd really love it if u comment and tell me to take care again!
    lolzz
    xoxo dhaval

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Loved it hunny! Especially "to protect me from all the shit" Love you!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    Sorry to ruin the 5.0 rating, but I just didn't feel it in this poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    aw, this ones sad, but i love it,

  • 19 years ago

    by Hopeless Romantic

    wow! thats about all i can say to this one. should let him go though! abuse. not good and doesnt have to be taken. great poem though! 5/5

    Mike

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