I want to know

by The Poetic Child   Jul 6, 2005


You broke up with me,
i still don't know why,
i still cant see

What did i do Wrong,
how did i mess up,
how can i act strong

You said i was good,
but why,
i did anything i could,

Excuse After Excuse,
Whats the real reason,
I want to declare truce,

If i was the best,
then y did you break up wit me,
i was better then the rest,

Anything u wanted i got,
u said i was so good,
i guess I'm not,

I'm not Trying to get back wit you,
I'm done wit it,
me and you are through,

I just want to know,
what did i do wrong,
did i move to fast or was i to slow,

I don't have any feelings,
they were all in the past,
and they were up in the ceilings

your supposed to strive for the best guy,
wasn't that me,
i never said one shitful lie,

yet u still lied,
on your excuses,
back when i was feeling i should have died,

So Now tell Me whats the Real,
Reason for this break up,
even for the love i had,
the love i us-to feel......

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    It kept me reading...love it love it love it...hehe there i go again lol

    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Love how this poem builds and builds wit every line. Thats awesome.l

    LISSA

  • 19 years ago

    by simply taylor

    that was good. i could totally relate to it!! c.j., the guy i used to go out with, called me over the phone and broke up with me, and he never told me why. everbody told me is that he thought that i was too shy and i never talked to him. but i talked to him a lot just no at school. and yeah. that's my story...LOL good job!