What am i like ?

by leah   Jul 6, 2005


What is it like me from the outside ?
have i changed has the real me died ?
has my good me been buried beneath grains of sand and barbed wire walls that cave in on me every time i try to climb out .or is it people that have changed trying to mess with my head telling me Ive changed when they have changed instead .
all i feel is that i am dead inside sitting here writing this slowly so slowly going out of my mind

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  • 19 years ago

    by xXxDarkPrincessLozxXx

    I like that poem, it has a lot of passion and thought in the writing, its different as well...I like it a lot

  • 19 years ago

    by jaki

    your writing seems so real so passionate... i had to read that twice to make sure it was real...

    *jackie*

  • 19 years ago

    by RaNdOmGaL

    i luv your poem it is soooo true!!!
    keep on writing your great poems!!
    luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lone-doodler (C)

    Good Poem my deary!!

    You rock...Whatever happen's you'll always have El Loneo Doodlero...:D...

    Peace!