by Tom Swart Jul 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The words of my love take flight |
by kimara4955
You have capturvated me, from beginning to end was so beautifully written, your words flow so natural but their meaning is great. your poems leave me speechless. i feel connected to the emotions you express their not forced and are true to you, it is obvious your heart and soul is put into each poem. 5/5 xx |
This is so beautiful and touching from the beginning to the end. Every stanza is filled with an amount of emotions expressed greatly. I could really feel evrything that you described here within each heartfelt line. I like the ending a lot, it is captivating and effective, and it sums up the message of the whole piece excellently. Amazing and enjoyable read. |
by Orchid Lady
You lost her...? I was deeply touched by this poem *5/5 |
Trully amazing, I dont know what more I can say!. |
by Alison
I really like how you've compared your love to nature. The imagery is beautiful, and I love it. Thank you for such a wonderful piece; and also, thank you for the comment on my work as well. |