Wow, i just got out of bed, kissed my girlfriend, told her good morning, and read this, and basically just cried. Dear lord, this is absolutely beautiful. The over all idea, this relation of nature to oneself... existenstentialism (holy shit i cant spell) is usually a pretty drab poetry subject for me, i usually find its a wonderfully creative idea, and i believe in a lot of motive and ideas themselves, but the art always seemed so forced, and just boring. But not this one. I think because its more a vehicle for the idea than an actual relation. just that last verse though, is so heartbreakingly beautiful. I wish i could critique this one, i want you to like, review it and send it in somewhere, wo many people need to rread this poem. Absolutely gorgeous.

thanks guys for your wonderful and heart felt comments, I too enjoyed this poem and it was nice to feel the love again as i wrote it..

Oh wow, I truly love this write, very creative and I love how you compare your love to nature, I never would have thought to write something like this. Beautifully done, very heartfelt and moving....... A true masterpiece!!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

this poem was great, full of emotion. i love the way you compared love with leaves. thank you for the delightful comment =)

Oh My! I love the way this heartfelt write
follows the cycles of a tree as it makes its
change through the seasons. Thoughts like
leaves come and go through the cycles of life
and never-ending new ones bud, as the love
made from strong roots shall always remain.

I look forward to reading more of your work
as this poem has captured my heart. Thank
you for sharing and Write On.

This is very beautiful.Excellent images and metaphors(I've used the leaf image in a couple of my own pieces).The flow is smooth and the emotions conveyed so well.There is so many good points in this it's hard to mention specifics.A beautiful poem of love.

Tom,

This is such an exceptional piece, the first stanza blew me away completely. It is a masterpiece, well written and the imagery is superb.

regards,

Steve

Exquisitely wonderful, bravo, rapturing and resplendent in its imagery and wondrously written with and in every word!!!

I loved it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Touched my heart and I'll admit the tears did flow. What a beautiful comparison. Well done!

Wow.i really enjoyed reading this poem. it was rreally good. i like the title of the poem. it drew me in lol. but yeah anyways. this was a really good poem. and thanks for commenting on my :D

Wow amazing stanza's and emotions!! =o]

~BRAVO~
Tom, this poem was amazing! The wat you have written this piece is beautiful. Excellent job!

I really like how you've compared your love to nature. The imagery is beautiful, and I love it. Thank you for such a wonderful piece; and also, thank you for the comment on my work as well.

Trully amazing, I dont know what more I can say!.
Just beautifully done!
And thank you for your kind comment on my own work.
Have a well deserved 5

You lost her...? I was deeply touched by this poem *5/5

This is so beautiful and touching from the beginning to the end. Every stanza is filled with an amount of emotions expressed greatly. I could really feel evrything that you described here within each heartfelt line. I like the ending a lot, it is captivating and effective, and it sums up the message of the whole piece excellently. Amazing and enjoyable read.

You have capturvated me, from beginning to end was so beautifully written, your words flow so natural but their meaning is great. your poems leave me speechless. i feel connected to the emotions you express their not forced and are true to you, it is obvious your heart and soul is put into each poem. 5/5 xx