Comments : Slipping Through the Hour Glass

  • 19 years ago

    by Moose

    hi, tahst so deep, its really kool, you manage to think of thinsg taht have meening whe you read the, but that might not seem to mean it when u write tethm, lke teh bit about presisng the rewind button, well u no what i meen
    n e way it was really good, bye

    couldnt be bother wriing my name, im tired :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Short and sweet.

  • 19 years ago

    by Hayley

    this is good, short but awesome...i like the whole idea of stopping time, just to rest, and wishing you could start over,...the end question is something i think about all the time...what am i really worth..
    awesome poem-hug-hayley