Comments : A Piece Of Me

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Good poem, something similar happened to me like that only it wasn't just a piece of me....i have proof on my arm and legs and ankles.... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Very relateable- I love it.

    5/5

    My piece is lost and your not here
    Still knowing that, the feeling I felt before
    Would never leave
    Because no matter how hard I try,
    You’ll always be a piece of me.

    I love that

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Thanks for commenting my poems Delicious Gift From Hell and In the Devil's Band! I made the change you suggested too