Again...great emotion. You really know how to convert your feelings into words in a way that is understood. Because of that...you will go far.

~*~Christina~*~

aw...you whowed your feelings very well in this one....great job....5/5

i really enjoy this poem, but i mightve gotten the wrong voice from it. WIth the conventions yu use early on, it adds a very definite tone to it for me, and i very much like it. The firmness of the response at the end cements that idea for me as well. This is a very straightforward message poem, with a great though. Beautiful layout of words as well. good job.