Very good poem! I liked it alot..! |
by Andrea
wonderful poem, i love it! |
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tear and tear are spelled the same lol |
by LindaPham
lol sorry then |
i like it, the only suggestion I have, is that maybe you should do another version, that doesnt end in cutting, so more people can realate to it...cunstructive critisisim! other than taht great job love<33 |
great job hunny |
by NannO
gr8.. i lykd it.. nice rhyme.. u kept it short and straight to the point.. |
by Danielle
It flowed great. 5/5. Awesome job hunnie! |
This was great it had a great flow to it i luved it |
by TAYLOR
Wow, this poem is amazing :) |