Clever poem, i like the way it talks to you, the voice that so many people experience and hear, I can relate to this one a lot, very good, interesting idea, well done

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this is so creepy and yet when I read it I feel like I can hear this voice in my head. Subtle yet daunting. Very good.
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Oooo eerie...

hehehehe BOO i like it lol SPOOKIE hehe

BOOOOOOO.....LOL i love it sweetie! 5/5

ok, this one...is very good, i love the unique style, but some of it didn't make sense to me...and it kinda threw me off in the dark category, it was more of a sadness, depression type thing, but you're the writer! good job otherwise! keep it up!

Good write, but i agree with ashli..

i gave it a 5.. :)

I love your choice of words, they add a great effect to the poem. An incredible piece of work.
Peace, love and empathy.

WOW! Great work. Very dark! Keep up the amazing poems!
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~*hAiLy*~

wow! i can almost here the voice in my head. nice work keep it up.

Emma
5/5

gr8 poem.. new of the sort.. never read a poem that told the truth of dark voice lyk that..lyk its not beatin round the bush n all.. its unique.. i lovd the rhyme.. and dark is one of my fav categories.. u gave ur words lyf.. thumbs up 4 that
keep up the talent
nouna

Very different! But i really liked it.. the way you layed it out as a poem was also unique..keep up the great work

This would have been better if you made the person talking to you was infact death but still a good start keep writing...

I like your style! You have a style all your own! Dark and deep! Once again another well written poem! ~Brooke~

I think I commented on this before, It was good alot more clearer, but I think if you would have made death talk to her it would hold more power to it but all and all nice attempt...