by ...:NiKi:... Jul 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
My heart is broken, my soul is bleeding |
by Unrequited
the last two lines were my favorite! someone could start reading this, and may hate it for some stupid reason. but once they get to the end, they would fall in love with it! great job! |
by erikka baby
This was very good. Keep up the good work. I'm adding you to my favorites list. |
by Lecrissa
Not your best poem, but it was good. |
Good poem, nice layout. Its like one of those snap shot moments in life you wish you could forget and it is noted down in poem form as if to help you come to terms with it. |
sad and has strong feelings I love it good job |