cute poem....but is that really happened to you? because i hate when people write poems thinking they understand about someone elses life and they dont. awesome poem though i loved it!!!

yea, its about me, n it didnt happen that long ago either

Know the feeling. *Hugs Niki*. Nice work.

Alls I can say is that that is awesome. No, really. It's like reading about my own past when I read your poetry. I really hope to read more from you. Drop me some comments, later.........

nice job! i think alot of ppl can relate to this one! keep writing!

awsome work.. very good... keep it up.. if you got time it would mean a lot if you checked out my poem "My dad: dead and gone forever" thanks a lot.. I voted a 5!

sad and has strong feelings I love it good job

-Josiah

Good poem, nice layout. Its like one of those snap shot moments in life you wish you could forget and it is noted down in poem form as if to help you come to terms with it.

Not your best poem, but it was good.

This was very good. Keep up the good work. I'm adding you to my favorites list.

the last two lines were my favorite! someone could start reading this, and may hate it for some stupid reason. but once they get to the end, they would fall in love with it! great job!