Comments : Is there a future?

  • 19 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Sweet wee poem. X

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    Wow....again, been there and done that......

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashli

    omg! this really hit home, this is almost exactly what i'm going through with my best guy friend! nice job!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow... great poem.. 5 stars!

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Of course you had better be sure so you don't ruin the friendship...that would be no good.

    I like the unsureness of this poem as it makes me wonder what happened or what will happen. I'm sure many people will be able to relate to this as well..

    Nice write.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    This was a trip. I mean it in the best way. I had such a friend growing up. He went to collage and I moved away.
    We still call each other from time to time and talk about what might have been.

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    aw i can really relate to this, good job!

  • 19 years ago

    by erikka baby

    I can relate! This was very good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    Uhh...Sounds like a lullabye almost...But poem wise it's not exactly unique, it has a standard rhyme and flow...And honestly it's a bit boring to read. At least you kept it short!

    But I hope you don't take this to be malicious or anything...It's not bad, it's just not good.

  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    5/5! you are truly talented! keep writing!