The Day I Left

by MiMi   Jul 6, 2005


The day I left i couldn't breath
The day I left i felt like everything i had was gone
The day I left u said goodbye with sad wave
The day I left u told me to hold on to what we had
The day I left who knew it would be the last day that i would see u.
The day I left was the day that i died because our love was gone.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jasonsboo

    gorgeous poem. 5/5 if you have the time maybe you could comment a few of my pomes. It would mean a lot to me.

  • 19 years ago

    by Cristina

    Its an awsome poem, and kind of sad....but keep up the good work !!!
    :)

  • 19 years ago

    by ranya

    nice poem...2 bad u cant see him again..but nice work

  • 19 years ago

    by Girl, Interrupted

    Hey! I thought it was a great peom...you have talent!:) Keep up the good work!

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