Ok this one was an extremely hard write, to be honest with you ppl its my first write ever it just took me this long to get the guts to post it. I hope everyone likes it. It wasn't hard because I was new at it but because of what it portrays. anyways enjoy and COMMENT, Merci beaucoup!

Theres a lot of emotion in that poem and i really liked it.

I loved the beginning the most.. But overall it's a very nice write.. 5/5 nothing less.. Hope to see some newer pieces from you soon.. Keep strong and take care (always))xx:

By the way, thanks for all your comments.. I really appreciate them.. But I must say I'm far, far from a legend.. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

hey there buddy...i'm guessing this is another song? Great job...! 5/5!

I really like the way this one flows!!! and it shows alot of emotion...