by shannon Jul 6, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Everyone come and stand up tall |
by Lyla
Very beautiful. The repitition was great and so was the rhyme scheme. The rhymes worked however they were very simple. Try a little more complexcity in your rhyming. Great poem! 5/5! |
by kiesha
wow! that was a really awesome poem. it's very true to life and it made me think a lot. good job. keep up the good work and take care. |
that was super insperational. i loved the rhyme scheme and the format. it was all very good. 5/5 |