That is good for a first poems great job keep writing

hey cristina..nice first poem..lol..its pretty good without rhyming but u should practise rhyming cause it will help u become alot better

I love it! I use to feel that way but like u said..."i moved on to a better life !!!!"...i loved that! Awsome job!!

Great poem to be your first i loved it my first poem was not this good keep up the great work!!!!