Hey very good.........I can say that I've been there and done that.....This one really hit's home.......

good job!keep writing!

Now this is a good poem. Neet job. *claps*.

You might put " I want someone new" on its own line. It was a great poem.

Omg! I loved this. I think it was sad, but at the same time, comforting to know that someone feels the way I do! 5/5

Hey loved this poem.. it reminds me how i once felt over this one guy.. loved it keep it up!

*look of perplexion crosses face* I don't think I'll rain on your parade. ;)

awesome, good, excellent! 5/5

you are a great writer, and you are now going on my favorites. this poem seemed more complete to me, you finished it very nicely. i see you are new to the site, so i hope you write many more! Tom

very touching, good job!