This sounds deeper than what it really says... like when drugs begin to control your life. I really like it! |
great images, your mood fits, your metaphores are awesome! love this poem! very well written, the ryhme fits every well! |
by kiesha
Wow, you did an amazing job on this poem! It was so enticing, I loved reading it. Keep it up! And thanks for the comment on mine, it means a lot. |
I love fairies, this poem is so sad, but in a beautiful way. Awesome work, it's never easy to discuss fantasy-type things without sounding cliche or forced but you did so well, great job! |