This sounds deeper than what it really says... like when drugs begin to control your life. I really like it!

great images, your mood fits, your metaphores are awesome! love this poem! very well written, the ryhme fits every well!

~Breeze

Wow, you did an amazing job on this poem! It was so enticing, I loved reading it. Keep it up! And thanks for the comment on mine, it means a lot.
> Kiesha

I love fairies, this poem is so sad, but in a beautiful way. Awesome work, it's never easy to discuss fantasy-type things without sounding cliche or forced but you did so well, great job!