Comments : Amorphous solidity

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Oh my... I am sorry I didn't realise you had posted another poem!
    This is beautiful. It's sorrowful, it's sophisticated. I love the disjointed feel- something you have mastered throughout your poetry. You have a defined style, it is a joy to read.
    "I gaze
    oculus of my own soul
    nous, physique, individuality
    unite
    in our demise
    gems of wisdom"
    Gorgeous. The love catagory fits this; it's a love poem, graceful yet melancholy.
    I truly admire and love your work. So keep writing.