Oh my... I am sorry I didn't realise you had posted another poem!
This is beautiful. It's sorrowful, it's sophisticated. I love the disjointed feel- something you have mastered throughout your poetry. You have a defined style, it is a joy to read.
"I gaze
oculus of my own soul
nous, physique, individuality
unite
in our demise
gems of wisdom"
Gorgeous. The love catagory fits this; it's a love poem, graceful yet melancholy.
I truly admire and love your work. So keep writing.