hey wat an awesum poem keep up the gud wrk

good job, another great poem...keep writing!

Sweetest poem I think I have ever met. Luke must be an awesome guy.

I didn't mean met..i meant read*. lol sorry

Beautiful. I love this one. Nicely spaced out and worded. And lovely message about love and what is possible...

xxx

Its beens years since a poem brought be to tears. The perfect flow...the naked emotion so raw and honest. Amazing. If there was a 20 I would have given you a 20...wonderful

wow this is a powerful poem to show that things do improve, i can't say i know what it is like living with only one parent but i wish you the best of wishes for your future and what may come to you! thanks for the comment~

~PLP~ lil slam~