I don't know how this poem isn't a 5.0 because I loved it. Your sytle as a writer is very good. I would like to add you to my favorites if thats okay with you [ I always ask before I do to make sure its okay with writer.] If you really feel like this you can always talk to me I here to land a hand a ear or whatever from one who knows depths of hell. If you ever get the chance I would appreciate if you check out my poems and tell me what you think.

It's beautiful....

Thats like the best poem ive ever heard!! well done :)

Loved the poem,each bit ov it...keep up the good work

Wow...i'll say this again: sad poem but i love it!!!

Hey im so sorry you lost your best friends. i love this poem it says a lot and if you ever want to talk tome i have msn, just check out my profile. you can talk to me about anything on your mind. i am really sorry that you have to go threw the pain of losing your best friends. remember you can always talk to me and i wont be the one saying o just believe in god and he can get you threw it but sometimes it just helps to be able to talk to somebody and if you want im that person. much love 5/5
ashley

It gave me chills while i read it. i really loved the very first part. i'm gonna put you on my favorites list.

*~vixen~*

Absolutely amazing. keep up the great work. nice flow, very well written. 5/5

Very depressing poem, very sad. Nicely written I liked it. 5/5

I know that im new but i love your poems... they are the best i have read and the fact that they are all true makes it better.. im sorry for all thats happen and i hope you are doing fine... but dont ever stop writeing....you are great at it.....

I LOVE IT BUT ITS SO SAD ! and so truley real .. like all u r stuff is like breakin my heart!i prolly sound gay lol... but its very sad and its like i can feel ur pain or as if i actually know u.. its like ur a friend and doin this and its kinda how it feels .. it kinda wierd !! ur an awesomepoet!

if u have msn add me plz . .... id love to talk to u ! .. cassie_marie09@hotmail.com

I love this poem. i love ur writing

I absolutely love this poem. I love the way you express your life through all of your poetry. This poem is sad, but I totally understand where it comes from. I used to cut as well. I'm not completely over it yet, I just don't so it often. I just really hope you are okay. 5/5

Wow...in a really good way! i really liked this poem in the sense that it made complete sense and it was just wonderful, i cant even explain it! i really think you can get somewhere with your poetry! wonderful poem, hope its not really how you feel though. 5/5.
With Love,
~*Katherine*~

Nice poem, I love the emotion in it.

Great poem...i love it! 5/5

xoxo becca

Excellent...this ones my favorite of urs.

xxxx ..::Broken Lullaby::..

Hey i love this too. keep wirting ..you're great at it. <3

I loved this poem. It is just as wonderful as the rest of yours. I love all of your work. this poem was amazing. 5/5

Kalee

This is so nice! i love it.... your poems are freaken awsome!