hey girlie! u r so talented!! my goodness! u just earned urself a spot on my faves list! nice job! :0)

wow that was great. each line just pulled me on to the next. and it was over before i knew it... it was a great poem keep up the great work!

Great poem, i like the way you wrote it. I like the rhyming scheme and it shows how you're feeling in detail. Take care and keep your chin up hun :)

amazing poem! very well written! and it was so full of emotion. it showed exactly how you felt. great job! keep it up!
crystal

I liked this,.. pretty decent flow.. a few lines didnt sit well with me, however.. i dont understand the "ill bury down" part.. that doesnt make sense to me. ive never heard anyone say ill bury down anything.. kinda redundant.. anyway.. good job altogether.. pretty good read..

Realize this,and in compliance
I'll bury down and scream away the silence

Amazing work! i love it. it flowed so well. very well written!
crystal

Wow this is such a good poem you have an excellent talent keep up the great work 5/5
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