by cant sleep
sounds really good. you really like this mysterious person huh? your words of choice are really well thought out. i liked it. 4/5. im gonna go check out some more of your poems. k? cool. yeah....bye! |
by Renee
Nice poem. It was very well thought out. I only saw one flaw, that one line where you said "you made me happy, not blue" Kinda turned me off, because it seemed quite mediocre compared to the rest of the poem. But the thought process that went into the whole poem seems like a lot. Good job. |
Wow! That's a very sad poem... but so full of emotion! I really liked it! Good job! |
Omg ur a great writer!!! keep it up |
by Shiloh
Hey, that poem is so awesome, and I know exactly how you feel... |
by BiLLy
Dude i feel the same way! |
by lover girl
Wow another great poem. its very touching |