by Wintersolstice Jul 7, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Let me tell you a tale |
this is a wonderful peice of work! |
by ...:NiKi:...
i love it so much, it tells how love can make u feel so much pain , great job! |
I liek this, it was really expressive. 5/5. keep writing. |
i changed my mind, the rhyming is great through the whole poem...just better in some places...good word choice in there too. i love it! |
Breathtakingly beautiful. The rhyming wasn’t as great towards the end, but it still works well…I love it. |