Comments : Sorrow and Pain

  • 19 years ago

    by Hayley

    wow again this is amazing. i love how you end each verse with some get only sorrow and pain. its really good and it gives me chills reading it! amazing keep it up! hugs-hayley

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    nice job on this poem i like it alot you did a lovely job 5/5 keep it up thanks for your comment it means a lot