I do like this poem. But theres something about the ending that doesnt feel quite final enough. Though maybe its just missing a full stop lol. X

Much better. Who gave you the two star rating tho-they should be shot! Nice work. Feels final now. X

Cool, I like this one just like it is.

This was very good. Your good at writing. Keep it up. xX

good writing... until I can't figure out what I "lack" make the poem stop form some reason.. I think i you can change that it would make it much better.. I tried finding another word that would fit in but I could not think of one off the top of my head... keep up the good work..

awesome! 5/5

I really liked your choice of words 5/5

another excellent poem, but again, i feel the is something missing from the end... but that may be a good tactic, too- it would leave people wanting more... but it was great, and you get a 5!

this truly expresses life and the paths we take to move on in life, good job! 5/5!