Nicely done. I favor the beginning and the ending. Both make the rest flow smoothly together. |
by elizabeth
I love this because you can apply it to pretty much anyone that has hurt you. Whoever this particular poem is about, is not worth the pain, and I think this poem sums up everything they should hear. |
I like this because its amazingly truthful. Its a great write and straight forward to read plz comment and vote on some f mine and if u like my work plz add me to ur favs xx thx for ur time |
by Chris
wow. can't believe i haven't read this poem until now. it's great laura. and yeah, i know exactly what you mean but yeah. good poem |