by samara
. . .wow . . .very very good poem . . . i can relate perfectly. . . good job . . . |
by lauren.
i really like that. it actually made me want to cry. awesome poem. |
by Tanya
I must say that at first I wasn't gonna read this b/c it was so long... I'm glad I did b/c if I hadn't I would have missed out on something so good... |
by Augusta
I really like this poem. When one writes whats inside their heart, often its nothing but poetic, as is your case. Its very good, very real, and very sad. 5/5 |
by Tiffanie
Great job... |
You did a great job... It was soo good! I can totally relate to it to. It was so sad tho it made me cry a little! keep up the good workd 4/5 |
wow.. this is such a good poem.. and omg i feel the same way.. ive been heartbroken for this guy for what seems like forever now..</3 |
OMG... Im about to cry this poem was grt. I can tell it definately came from the heart and I truly feel ur pain. I hope ur ex could still be ur friend atleast u'll still have him in ur life! THIS POEM WAS REALLY LOVELY. I can really relate to it. U just dont understand how much I love this poem. LOL! Keep writing bc this poem really touched my heart. GRT JOB! |
by stephyG
ExElent work i really loved ur poem!! mwaz stephy :) |
by karen
that was wonderful!! 5/5! |
by mandi
I LOVED IT!!! oh my gosh! its like you read my mind! thats crazy... keep up the good work.... 5/5! |
wow..dat was a very gud poem..i can totally relate to it..i've been through this also..& i knw how it feels. i hope everything is going gud for u. ^_^ |
by ¤Brenda¤
That comment at the end was sweet. An the poem wasnt bad you can tell alot of heart went into it :)GoOdJoB |
by DAYLON
You expressed yourself, and that what makes a good poet to start with. Your writing will just get stronger. I have written a different type of love, if you would like to read. Plus big hug for you, as that was 1,000 tears from my heart for my boat to sail to your words of love. Take care Paul * * |
by Ariel
Wow. This is definitely a great poem. Good job. U better make sure this guy reads this, u hear? |
by Jeff
Great poem written with great poetry skills.You did very well.Jeff |
by christina
very awsome poem i really liked it ..... im kinda goin through the same but i dont know how to write my feelings down thy r just locked in side i guess lolll well anyways |
by mandi
GO GIRL! you got a featured poem! ugh! i'm so jealous..... lol..... congrats! |
by Fallen Angel
It can be better, but I still found myself to love it... It has a very good meaning, soemthing a lot of people can truely relate to, I could have but when I could have it would have been in a diffrent way, WOWH well I hope you can get taht and It didn't confuse you taht much, lol |
by Andrew
That was a lovely poem you wrote there. It started to made me cry due to my situation... I love someone who still loves their ex... but good poem! |