hey
its a great poem
im really sorry for your loss
wud u comment one my poem
World War II
thanx alot
sMil3 4lwayz =)

im really sorry about your brother that is a wonderful poem i just want to tell you when i was in school in march my class sent your brother letters u must miss him very much

I know how you feel one of mine and my dad's best friends just died from a roadside bomb and i use to love to play basketball and I can't anymore because our friend had taught me to play and since then I can't see myself ever playing again but I have to get to there day by day because I need to get back to the way I was and just forget about his death and try to play again!

~~>*Amanda*

I loved it!its a really great poem!!and im soo sorry!!but hes n a better place!!ur a great writer!!keep it up!!

Sad poem but greatly written 5/5