I don't think it was confusing. I think the angle that you wrote the poem explained why it didn't flow as a "normal" poem flows.
Very expressive. nice job!

Wow. Now that was just brilliant! I really like it, it was long, but the emotion in it was just so powerful and.. I could go on for hours, but its really beautiful :)

I have had no reason to vote any of your poems less then a five so far. This one is no exception. I think tht it is wonderfully done, i can't really put my finger on what it is i like about it..there are just somethings that can't be explained in words, truth is, i don't want to know...i think it is one of the better things in life that is still real. Mystery.

Anyways, was off topic, wonderful poem, great job as always.

P.S. wow you sure wrote a lot on my poems and i always try and payback the favor.

VeRy LoNg But Not BaD. <3 I think a bit to many "I'm sorry's" But other than that... awesome. 5/5

SAem comments as I have been giving. pretty cool

great poem...it's length amazed me. its very expressive and easy to relate to.

It's pretty long but worth it in my mind. really seems like you could make it into a song and thats a good thing:). great poem like usual and please keep writing!!

Wonderfully wirtten. I do admire your strength for writing this piece because I understand it must've derived from somewhere deep within. This is the case for most great poems. The emotion was obvious...beautiful way of expressing yourself.

~rolo

P.S. I do apologize for not commenting more, I've been going through some rough stuff. I appreciate all of your wonderful comments. I'll be reading more! Take care.

very well written..once again deep. your poetry is 10 times better then mine and has a lot more meaning..i loved this one..

Wow, ur parents must love you dearly, it sounds like its great to have a family. I wish I did. But sadly, it wont be, for me. I'm fine alone anyways...I never really needed any parents to look after me...though at times lost comfort can overwhelm me. Its good that you parents love you, I'm glad.
Very amazing poem with strong emotions, i liked it bunches!!!
weeping wolf~~~~

You dont really need to seperate this at all.... poetry is the expression of thoughts and feelings and as you probably very well know most thoughts and feelings arent always organized so why should all of our poems be....this is a beautiful expression of self