This poem was wonderful. I'm not sure if its true story, but there was so much saddness and pain expressed that I got a little teary. It was a pleasure reading your poem.

that is really cute! but so sad that he died!!! really good!!

5/5 I totally love this poem!!!!! you have a great talent keep the work up

AWW! This poem is so cute! There was so much feeling expressed in it, it made it feel real..you def. kno how to write....so write some more! Rach