The Perfect Painting

That was good. Short, but good. I know how you feel. Art is my life. Keep writing!

Short n sweet! loved it though.. all of ur poems were outstanding..! your very talentd kepe up the great work.

Is that it? There's more right? You got me all into it and then BAM...that was it! All gone..no more. ADD MORE COONAY. You could go all into the different colors and what part of the relationship they represented! Come on Coonay you got an imagination like ....well damn I don't know what but you have one!!! I've seen it! I've read it!! I've experienced it!!

Seriously RENEE...I love it but I wanted to keep reading. I think you could do a lot with this...You should think about it. I can't rip it apart as there is nothing there....

Ok I'm done hounding you.... ;)

Oh lovely, beautiful words, its amazing that a poem can paint a picture better than a picture itself sometimes ,if that makes sense.

short....but good. i like the whole relating love to a canvas and what not. good job!!!