by Brian n Josh Jul 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The sky was filled with smoke, a dense black |
Hey,thanks for the comment on my poem,this is a really good/sad poem,you and josh are great writers keep it up!! |
by Marine Wife
hey great poem... and thanx for commenting on mine |
by JLT
Great poems:') It made me cry. It's so sad. I like your poems. They're wonderful. Keep writing, i'm looking forward to reading more. *hugs* |
by Amba
That was good, i specially liked the last verse the best, its unfair aye.. |