That was good, i specially liked the last verse the best, its unfair aye..
very good poem tho
5/5
xox Bam

Great poems:') It made me cry. It's so sad. I like your poems. They're wonderful. Keep writing, i'm looking forward to reading more. *hugs*

~Jessica

hey great poem... and thanx for commenting on mine

Hey,thanks for the comment on my poem,this is a really good/sad poem,you and josh are great writers keep it up!!
x bRoKeN xx dReAmS x