by Hayley
wow amazing! you have courage to stop, its hard to stop! I'm proud of you, be strong! great poem! keep writing, thanks for the comment on my poem! awesome! hugs-hayley |
This was great!!! I love how I can relate to it, being that I used to be bulimic as well... and I cut. Great job... great rhyming and nice flow 5/5 |
by erikka baby
That was so sad. But I loved it |
by Amanda
I am soooo happy 4 u sweetie, bye bye Mia and don't come back to sabrina. Anyways another great poem from you and i am truely proud of you!!! :) |
by stephanie
aww i like it 5/5...nice poem...plz read and comment/vote on someof mine it would mean a lot thanks... |
by Dawson
wow that was very good i loved it |
thats such a powerfull poem well done! i love it, keep up the good work! |
by Samantha
Interesting. I like this better than the other two I commented on. It has more substance and more for the reader to think about. |
by Brookeღ
That was exellent such a great message of freeing yourself of the past. A lot of people should read this it sends a pwerful message! Very well written! I'm glad to hear you are letting go and moving forward in a positive way. ~Brooke~ |
aw that was so sad but so good! |
by *liZ*
great job... Yes, I totally relate to you, as you can see with my own poetry lol.. |
by *liZ*
hey i just awrote another one.. your poem anorexia hell inspired me. it's called "All about Ana" check it out:) it's short and not near as well written as yours but i was spilling out my thoughts. tell me if you like":) |
by SCARECROW
Very emotional poem, that's the best thing about it. And thank you so much for the lovely comment on Danse Macabre, I really appreciate it. |
by Mandy Lou
I really like this one...OMG! Great story...I'm so glad you decided to take back control and pride and go back to the way you were! It's a great story! |
by Clarissa
it was definitly well written, but kinda sad, but u did a good job expressin ur self |
oh wow this is deep..u sound like an awesum person |
Oh my...that is very creative...I love the parts saying you're taking back control, saying good-bye to your "friend" is a wise decision...and about cutting no more...great! |
So well written , i can relate with that feeling of fighting back and it is not an easy thing to do |