For The Person Who

by Laura   Jul 8, 2005


For the person who feels all alone in the world
Who can’t confide in any one?
Muffles all their cries at night
In hopes that no one will notice
For the person who lives in a daze
Hoping each day goes by faster
Not able to socialize
In hopes that someone will rescue them
For the person who puts everyone before themselves
Solving everyone’s problems
But cannot realize they are ignoring themselves
And their problems will only get worse
For the person who understands nothing
And is all confused inside

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  • 17 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    This is realy good : )
    keep writing poems like this
    <3 jess

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so seep and meaningful...also something I can relate to...
    I loved your use of imagery in this, as always.
    Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

  • 18 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    What a great poem, really well written and hits such a nerve with how so many people feel. 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Beautiful. i think that you should break it into stanza with every for the person. the end is perfect. nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Again, This was fantastic. I really loved this poem.

    In hopes that someone will rescue them
    For the person who puts everyone before themselves
    Solving everyone’s problems
    But cannot realize they are ignoring themselves
    [I loved that part so much.]

    There's not much else to say. I don't think there should be anything changed in this one. It was great the way it is. I could relate a little aswell. So that's even better. You've done an excellent job! Keep it up!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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