Agonies Final Scream

by Wintersolstice   Jul 8, 2005


It issues from your lips
At the second of final despair
You sink down to your knees
Your hands entangled in your hair

The tears flow down your face
Cold and filled with pain
Broken, hollow and hopeless
Unable to start over again

Too much has happened
For you to return
Your soul is finished
Your heart is in an Urn

Your weak right to the core
Fear has you in its grasp
You lie down upon the floor
And draw your final shuddering gasp

It issues from your lips
When you realise all is not a dream
In your highest point of despair
Comes agonies final scream.

Copyright Mairi Mackenzie 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "Agonies Final Scream"
    the title..."Agony's" more appropriate I think, I'm pretty sure you were indicating ownership, not multiple agonies.

    same goes for the last line
    ~~~
    "Your weak right to the core "
    "you're" not 'your'
    ~~~
    I thought the imagery and descriptive diction was very well done, and captivating enough that I didn't notice the rhyme scheme at all, though it played a large role in constructing the powerful rhythm.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Black*Rose~

    This poem is a wonderfull one, and again you bring feeling to heart, not only dose this poem have a wonderfull flow and rhym to it, it has dark meaning, i love this poem it was a great job, and there is no doubt that you took allot of time and effort on it.

  • 19 years ago

    by jello

    this is an amazing poem...i gave you a 5.

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Wow...I'm speechless. Amazing poem. It deserves a 5 for sure!

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    I loved the way it flowed and I also love the ending.. Very nicely written.. 5/5 none to less.. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

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