Lovely job here. I like the form and the flow... |
by LAST RONIN
I like the style, i like poems that are diffrent |
by o so lonley
i like this one even if u dont so ha! |
by Lenny
Wow, that is aa awesome piece of literature, some lines have a few too many words and you lost the rhyme in the middle there but apart from that it has a great story line and I really liked it |