Comments : Beneficial Hate

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Lovely job here. I like the form and the flow...

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by LAST RONIN

    I like the style, i like poems that are diffrent

  • 19 years ago

    by o so lonley

    i like this one even if u dont so ha!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Wow, that is aa awesome piece of literature, some lines have a few too many words and you lost the rhyme in the middle there but apart from that it has a great story line and I really liked it

    -Lenny