sounds like your girls a little bit of a control freak? lol. I love the imagey you have in your poems! they are amazing. this line seems to be a turning point in the poem:
"You speak words of trust but your self-proclaimed honesty is it truly honest?"

I realy like it because it shows your desperation; how you want to be free, and yet, at the same time, you are in love, and dont want to ever leave her. It is a ture show of a battle within yourself, which i myself have felt.

I love your style!

~Breeze