Striped Naked

by Jacklyn   Jul 8, 2005


I might as well be naked,
For you see right through my clothes,
You see past my flesh and bone,

For you see deep into my soul,
Understand me from head to toe,
Know what motivates my moves,

Know how much I care for you,
Know my thoughts and kindness,
You see things from my view,

Understand me completely,
As you set my mind free of chains,
Letting me be me,

But most of all you know,
How you fill my heart, thoughts and soul,
And deep inside you know it’s true,

I do the same thing for you.
Nothing covering me up,
No clothes, no mask no make-up,

The real me and the real you,
Experiencing the meaning of love and truth.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Well written sweetie. There is nothing more special than knowing a love that's real. 5/5 as always.

    Love yah,
    - Kals.

  • 19 years ago

    by Tammy

    Jacklyn
    Wonderful write my friend. I really liked these lines

    The real me and the real you,
    Experiencing the meaning of love and truth.

    Just the way it should be :o)

    Take care & God bless!

  • 19 years ago

    by Roni

    this is plain sweet. I like this one. 5/5

    ~Roni~

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    I've been noticing that you've been writing love poems lately. (awww) I like the idea of being yourself around the person you care about most it's sooo sweet. =) Peaces and Lotsa Luvs and Hugs Always ~lil slam~, Love, //ari\\

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