My Life

Another great poem but a really sad one, I like the way you express your feelings, it is just so great...
keep it up, and great job again
5/5

This is a sad poem with an almost uplifting message at the end: write and don't let things take control of you.

My life is a story,
Written in rhyme

I loved this part especially.

That was very sad, as I'm sure almost everyone would agree, and I hope that it is not true.
If it is then I don't blame you for writing dark poetry, but if it isn't, you're a very talented writer.

Good Writing!
beth

This is sad...i hope this is not true...but i feel like it is true...if it is i am sooo sorry...this poem is really good and i don't think anyone can change the way you write...5/5...u r very passionate..keep it up

Oh my.. I'm so sorry! That's horribly sad.. I got in a car wrek (not a horrible one though, we were lucky) and now I'm overly cautious.. even though I'm not doing the driving yet.

5/5 Excellent write! Again I love the flow. I love the message behind it.. keep writing, and I hope you're okay.

Saiya