by ...:NiKi:... Jul 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
All alone |
by ASPHYXIATED
Another greart poem.. soft in a way not hard words just a story soft story.. you understand? |
i am so adding you to my favorites, your talent is amazing!!! |
by Lovemylove
really sad but I like it. |
this is a really good poem! i think that you have alot of great talent! keep writing! if you get a chance plez rate and read my poems! |
by Unrequited
that is a great poem, but i think the last line leaves the poem too open... the line is great, but i feel there should be more to the poem... but it is still a 5, mainly because the feeling you put into it is my favorite kind of poem. thanks for your comments! |