Very enjoyable, keep up the writing

Like it all the way up untill the last stanza which does not seem to atain the same standards as the rest of the poem. But still good work as usual. Just needs a bit of tweaking in my opinion. :~)

i can relate to it. its like me againt the world..ya know? read some of mine and comment.. thanks! 5/5

great rhyming, this is a really great poem, good job.

I can relate to this. I loved it.

good poem .. I agree with wintersolstice about the ending

wow this poem was awesome.. reallie likd the ending though! great job.

Nice write. I like the story telling. I like the poem but thought maybe you could have told what would bring her true bliss. We know she's sad and down but what could make her happy? Other than that I really liked it and it's still really good the way it is. Nicely done! :)

good poem i liked it
thanks for the comment

I don't like the rhyme, it's forced.

But the sentiment isn't bad for a poem.

I loved it! 5/5

sad : ( very well written and great word choice! Great job!

Another excellent poem hun! 5

This was very sad...

The rhymes were good, yet the flow could have been given more work to...

The dread and fear
has yet to subside
from her lonely mind,
now she wishes she died

that part stood out...

You manage to tell what needed to be told with so few words, which is a very good thing..

keep it up

that is a great poem, but i think the last line leaves the poem too open... the line is great, but i feel there should be more to the poem... but it is still a 5, mainly because the feeling you put into it is my favorite kind of poem. thanks for your comments!

this is a really good poem! i think that you have alot of great talent! keep writing! if you get a chance plez rate and read my poems!

leanna

really sad but I like it.

i am so adding you to my favorites, your talent is amazing!!!

Another greart poem.. soft in a way not hard words just a story soft story.. you understand?
Well I liked it alot well done!