*Shivers* eerie fealing amongst the sorrow. Is the last line maybe supposed to have a ? mark.

I'm not sure what to say... It is a good write but i think it could use more..maybe more visual or longer i'm not for sure but it seems to need more!!!

Marie

Once again formats kinda weird but hey at least your trying different things im boring and usually stick to one form so great job once again i think your a genius your ideas are amazing great poem keep this up its great i love reading your stuff