Oooh Vampireish...the first and last stanzas are my fave. Good and dark.

loved it great. very dark i like it alot.

Incredible work. I am glad I had the fortune of reading it.

impressive you explain the darkness inside you well....

so well done vampires?? loved it

Most of what I seen you write was very clear this one was vauge to say the least I think you were writing about a vampire but I can only guess. Read Set Free and Countess Of Blood both are very clear and hold thier own as a poem you may like them too take care and always be well...

These are really good, have you ever tried to write a short story? Once again ill give you a 5/5! If you decide to write a short novel, i would like to be the first to know!

Very deep and dark, sucks you in.

Again, nice poem, i prefer dark poems for some reasons.... i think people can put a lot of really good ideas into them.... you've proved me right !!

Anyways... really great i like it a lot !!

XxX Cici XxX

Okay this is really good like just writing i dont like the format you chose to use i think you should switch it all around so it flows better but I LOVE the idea and i love your word choice

Another great poem. This one didn't really rhyme, but it flowed beautifully and you don't need to rhymre for a poem to be great.
Love always,
~BJ~

Wow this is really dark...5/5....my fav stanza was:
Hiding from the day,
I cannot stop the hunger in me
I'm cursed, I'm haunted.
And this way, I must stay.

expecially the last line....it sounds so beautiful....great job

Ahhh omg!! another dark one!!!
hahahaa oh wait, I picked with one out lol :P damnit I love this stuff.. its awesome!! uber awesome job :)

Wow... you're poems are really dark, but thats why I like 'em n_n haha sorry i'm hyper. anyways you're a really good writer keep it up!!