Comments : Please dont wake me..

  • 19 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Awww, I loved this PoeM hun!!!
    5/5!!!!<3 Elizabeth

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    awww this is so good you did a lovely job keep up the good work 5/5 and thnaks so much for your comment it means a lot to me

  • 19 years ago

    by TJ

    that reminds me of someone who ended it over a lie......i liked it

  • 19 years ago

    by brittany

    thx for the commit. love this poem 5/5 keep up the good wrk

  • 19 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    Hey! Its Lizzie! Awesome poem, really liked the final message, and how it fit the rest of the poem! Great job love..<3

  • 19 years ago

    by *melted*dreams*

    omg i love the ending! your a great writer so keep it up!....5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by 1

    That was a very sad yet a beautiful poem. 5/5. Perfect. Keep wrting.

    Luv,
    Noziyna

  • 19 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    good job...i like that...its kinda...cool but the title mad me think it would be something diffrent...but w\e its good...
    later
    liz

  • 19 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Ok i know i have comment on this b4 but i just read it again ..and than read my comment b4 and it was weird..but anyway i LOVE this poem..almost as much as i LOVE uu... ur a kick ass girl
    stay chill
    lizz