by CHOKE
Awww, I loved this PoeM hun!!! |
by XxTeArSxX17
awww this is so good you did a lovely job keep up the good work 5/5 and thnaks so much for your comment it means a lot to me |
by TJ
that reminds me of someone who ended it over a lie......i liked it |
by brittany
thx for the commit. love this poem 5/5 keep up the good wrk |
Hey! Its Lizzie! Awesome poem, really liked the final message, and how it fit the rest of the poem! Great job love..<3 |
omg i love the ending! your a great writer so keep it up!....5/5 |
by 1
That was a very sad yet a beautiful poem. 5/5. Perfect. Keep wrting. |
by e LIZ a beth
good job...i like that...its kinda...cool but the title mad me think it would be something diffrent...but w\e its good... |
by e LIZ a beth
Ok i know i have comment on this b4 but i just read it again ..and than read my comment b4 and it was weird..but anyway i LOVE this poem..almost as much as i LOVE uu... ur a kick ass girl |