My suicide note (real)

by Lost2Life   Jul 9, 2005


I\'m giving up all hope
Its all over now
I really can\'t take it anymore
it all falls to the ground
So here as I write my note,
I\'ll make copies and send it around
And then maybe you will see
THE REAL ME

To my \"friends\"
Who couldn\'t look or see
The fact that I was hurting
Past the facade of happiness
Those who didn\'t actually see me
Thank you for never caring
This cuts for you

To my \"Family\"
Thanks for never giving a sh it
For acting like I wasn\'t there
And when I was I was dirt!
Just a worthless human being
Thank you for all the pain..
This cut is for you

To the world
Open up your da mn eyes
And fuc king look around!
See those broken people
See their fuc king needs!
Thank you for not noticing me
This cuts for you

To society
Those who think your better
Then every other da mn person
The snobs who people really hate
The back stabbers, and the players
Thanks for telling me I should die
This cut is for you

To myself
I wish I could stand strong
I wish I could believe it\'ll get better
I know it has to go down this way
I know it has to end
Thanks for trying to last
The last cut is for myself

Rhys
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  • 19 years ago

    by *+*BrOkEn EyEs*+*

    heya, i just wonna say dat im hopen dat poem isnt 4 real.

    my bruther tryed commiten suaside about 4 months ago. he was 17 a felt ther was no reason to live life..

    i got home from skool and say a note on my bed from him..sayin sow much he is gonna miss me and by that stage i had the idea that he was dead.. i walked out to the kitchen and my mum and dad were cryin. to my relife mum walked in his room befor it was too late...she found him laying on the ground with pill packets skatterd on the floor.

    by brother is my best frind the reson wht i still stick around my family. i look up to him and would never cope if he ever left me for good.

    i used to be a cutter but after that happend thers no way in hell id do it again.

    suaside affects allot of uther people aswell as your self so please think about how many teas will be shed if you every left this life or yours... i dont know you and how the life you gose about but i do know there is BOUnd to be people out there hoo love you very much ... be strong and dont let any one get u down.

    sorry its so longs i just luv ur poems and thawt id tell u a lil bout my expeariences peace out luv bek

  • 19 years ago

    by Ehsi

    A Man, Um Yea really nice, I liked it...
    Well not to sound ignorant or anything,
    But tell me when your ganna die,
    Oh & Don't commit sweet suicide
    -nobody

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather

    THATS A VERY NICE POEM! I JUST HOPE YOUR NOT PLANNING ON COMMITING SUICIDE! BECAUSE REMEMBER~!~SuIcIdE iS a PeRmAnEnT SoLuTiOn tO a TeMpORaRy PrObLeM~!~ IF YOU NEED SOMEONE TO TALK TO EMAIL ME AT dixie_darlin315@yahoo.com BECAUSE I WAS SUICIDLE AND I GOT HELP AND SO SHOULD YOU! :D