Your gaze.

by Steven Beesley   Jul 9, 2005


The very first time I saw your gaze, it hit me like a lightning bolt; I was mesmerized and dazed.
I could not stop thinking of you for days and days.

It was love at first sight, you had put me in a maze.
The years have passed, but even now I am bewildered and amazed.
I still look into those sweet brown eyes and your spell stills keeps me in a blissful haze.

Forever I will melt inside your seductive gaze. For you have driven me into a craze.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    What you wanted to say in this poem was good, but not the structure of the poem. The fact that every line rhymes makes the poem seem a bit dull, and you are not letting your heart speak. Instead, try writing a longer poem where you actually describe the love..make the words come out of the paper (screen). Anyway, nice job. I just think this poem needs to be revised and worked on, but I hope I didn't sound too harsh. Keep writing,
    Dorotea

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