Betrayed

by Momentary Relapse   Jul 9, 2005


I write everything confess all to you
Let everything pour out of my soul
My confessions have left me weak and sad
Each and every secret I speak to you

I sit writing down everything I feel
Confessing everything as I cradle my head
The lines of words spiral into you
There is nothing from you that I conceal

I'm left weakened by my confessions
I had given u everything inside
From my head to hand I pour out all
Stuck inside these deadly positions

In the end I had been betrayed
You revealed every dark secret I hold
I never expect you to do this to me
Like a fool you truly had me made

I told you everything and then you turned
You allowed each secret out into the open
Relishing as people read all my thoughts
I feel how deeply your betrayal burned

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  • 19 years ago

    by .

    wow that was really good 5/5!
    keep it up you got talent!
    Becky

  • 19 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    I told you everything and then you turned
    You allowed each secret out into the open
    Relishing as people read all my thoughts
    I feel how deeply your betrayal burned
    Great great great last verse very hurtful and true,
    Great write, Keep it up.
    Plz comment n vote on some of mine and if you like my work plz add me to ur favs xx n e way thx for ur time

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    It is always a good point to keep one part of yourself secret, most people wouldn't understand it even if you tried to explain them.

    They make fun only because they don't truely understand. They don't know what the problem is....it's them.

    Wonderful poem and i think you should keep up the good writing five gold stars for you :) hehe

    That being said. I wanted to thank you for your vote/and or comment on my poem, i really do appreciate each one that i get from people. I really like the comments that i get, they all mean so much to me.

    Signed,
    Dark Savior

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    i know this feeling you did a great job 5/5 keep it up

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